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Luke Yasenha (WIP)

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Luke Yasenha (WIP)

Post by Luke Yasenha on Sat Dec 27, 2014 11:07 pm







(Vizard)

(Your character here)


Luke Yasenha


"Once someone understands someone's pain, we all become closer, it is my intention to show everyone pain so they may better understand what it truly feels like for someone else in pain..."



Basic Information:

Name: Luke Yasenha
Age: 426
Age Appearance: 26
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Thirteen Court Guard Squads, Squad Three
Rank: Lieutenant of squad three
Residence: In the squad three barracks in the seireitei
Appearance:
General Appearance:

Luke is a fairly well round build, preferring speed over strength but he's not lacking in the sense that his body isn't

Personality: {How does your character think?}



Your Legacy:

Character Story:

{What's the story behind who you are, it doesn't have to be long, but don't make it too short either. We embrace creativity, and love a mystery. Though we would like to see your full visored history on how you conceived your mask and all, we would much rather see it in the process of RP-ing here. So like shinigami, you will be a rogue after approval, free to join any organizations/clans that may tickle your interest.}

RP Sample:

http://www.bleachdynasty.com/t6507-zanjutsu-classprivate-luke


Powers & Abilities:


Ability Name: Reiatsu of living shadows (all abilities)
Ability Effect: Luke has unique reiatsu, which is pitch black in color. Upon releasing his reiatsu, the area drains of color around himself and anyone within range of his reiatsu, leaving the area only black and white, also it's quite common for things like small plants and leaves to kill themselves or decay and fall to the ground as his reiatsu naturally produces a feeling of intense despair, causing these plants to die of their own accord but due to the unique fusion of him and his hollow, his reiatsu also has the natural ability to manipulate shadows within a limited radius for summoning blades, walls and anything else he can think off. this can combine with his dark cell regeneration to allow him to take the form of people he has seen or eaten.
Downside: must be constantly using reiatsu to use and can put a strain on him the longer he has shadow constructs out so to conserve his energy, he must deactivate his shadows with a post cool down equal to the time he had the construct out plus if he has time to reactivate this ability of his reiatsu. also the things he can create with his shadows are limited to the size of the shadows in question so it requires focus on what he can form in specific shadows. also changing his form normally takes time and not good in combat and since his reiatsu in any taken form is a hollow's, he must repress his reiatsu to keep it hidden, also that his eyes can change to his hollow eyes during times when he acts similar or more like his hollow or a hollow in general in fact so the user must be very careful with how and when to use this ability.

Ability Name: Shunpo mastery (all abilities)
Ability Effect: Luke has trained within the stealth force by former lieutenant of squad two, Ryo Suzuki, this allows him access to varies hidden stealth shunpo techniques and vastly increases his natural speed and shunpo to great lengths, making him able to not only keep up with captain-level shinigami with only little more effort then normal but can easy recognize and analyze someone else's high speed technique.
Downside: None

Ability Name: Dark cell regeneration (sealed, Hollow)
Ability Effect: This unique power of Luke's comes from the unique fact that during a patrol when still a student, came across a black vasto-lorde hollow named shadow and although he just managed to beat it, the hollow fused itself into Luke's body, making a shinigami-hollow hybrid, similar to a Vizard but while having a inner hollow, his hollow isn't sealed inside his mind but Luke and the hollow are the same person and this power comes from their innate fusion at the cellular level: by forming negative cells to regenerate whatever was lost then with the body's natural positive energy countering it, returning the cells back into a neutral state, this power allows Luke to literally come back from the dead, no matter what happens, apart from decapitation or if anything is sliced off as they take longer to reform.
Downside: This fusion of two bodies resulted in Luke gaining twice the pain receptors then normal, therefore anytime this ability has to be used, his pain skyrockets far beyond what would be considered for the injury and also that this ability isn't instant as it takes time for the dark cells to form so in this way, it's inferior to a normal hollow's instant regeneration which can regenerate something like a limp in mere seconds, this will take up to the entire post to simply regrow a limp and more for anything else lost, making it quite easy to keep him down if this ability is pushed to it's limit, especially for those capable shunpo/sonido/Hirenkyaku users.

Visored Information:

(Before being able to produce mask and use vizard abilities, proper training must be done despite membership date within group. The more training you do, the better your control is. Mask Duration will be added when Vizard is ready for RP.}

Visored Mask:
Hollow mask appearance:
Luke's hollow mask has a four split mandible mouth, two horns and the unique aspect that it's the only hollow mask in existence to be completely black instead of the traditional white, although it has three, red tear marks running from the eye sockets to the bottom of the mask, the bottom also has a split small goatee beard-like part attached to the bottom two mandibles.
Hollowfication: To don his hollow mask, he wills the very shadows around him to summon spirit energy from them that surrounds him, howling and screaming before he allows the shadows to attack his face, forming the hollow mask onto his face, this does cause extreme pain upon donning and his mouth and jaw is ripped out of alignment to match the four split mandibles design of his hollow mask. Besides his mouth being ripped out of place and split apart, his eyes also changes with the whites of his eyes becoming pure black, his blood red eyes darkening slightly and glowing with a soft red aura and his pupils change into reptilian slits.
Hollow Manifestation: Before being trained, if Luke's hollow were to take over, it would first form half of it's mask over Luke's face, doing what it would do normally but instead of Luke being in control, shadow would be.

The second stage would start to form black bone armour over his hands and feet, his feet armour having only two front toes and one back one while his hand armour would look the same as a normal hand, only with sharper claws on the ends of his fingers, but also large bat wings with dragon scales on the outside and the inside of the wings similar to a bats, showing the fleshy inside part of the wing and a tail with a tri-pronged end and a ruby housed in the end of the tail would tear out from his back and the end of his spine (although once in control, Luke freely gains the ability to summon the wings and tail upon donning his mask).

The final stage complete changes Luke into shadow, leading to them switching places with shadow becoming the dominant personality and Luke taking on a inner shinigami role as it were, his final form is this:



This is the true form of Luke's inner hollow: a shadow demon with black mist swirling around his body. this form fully releases shadow personality as a merciless killer and a creature that loves nothing more then to make people suffer and devour anyone he meets, especially those with large amounts of spiritual pressure and energy as he finds the large the energy, the tastier his meal is, although despite his beastly ways, he isn't stupid either, he enjoys figuring out ways to hunt his prey via various methods from hiding in the shadows to stork his prey to creating various distraction to keep his prey on edge and get them terrified that he could be anywhere, one of his favorite is devouring someone and leaving their corpse for someone to find like a fishermen leaving bait, although in this case, it's in hope that someone tasty will find it and investigate so he can lead them into a trap and kill them. He also speaks in a whispery-like voice and most of the time, likes to speak with a poetic tone of voice.


Zanpakutō:
Zanpakuto Spirit Description: {Describe your Zanpakuto Spirit}
Zanpakuto Name: Zetsubō no Sākuru (Crushing Despair)
Sealed Appearance: The sealed appearance is of a wakizashi-sized blade with a black circular guard with six thin but long rods coming from the inside of the guard and attaching it to the handle, which is covered in black wrapping.


Shikai
Name: Zetsubō no Sākuru
Shikai Release Phrase: "Unsheathe the hushed casket..."
Released Appearance: Upon release, it becomes a intangible six foot blade of black mist with a thin twister of mist wrapping around the blade from tip to where the blade meets the guard, the guard itself and anything below it remains unchanged.
Shikai Special Ability: Emotion manipulating illusions


Bankai
Name: Zetsubō Shadō Hasai (Crushing Despair Shade)
Bankai Release Phrase: Nothing, apart from saying "Bankai"
Released Appearance: (What does your Zanpakuto look like in its final state)
Bankai Special Ability: (What can your Bankai do that makes it special)


Abilities

(Max 16, you can add/unlock as you progress, but to be able to use technique, you must acquire it in-game)

Name: Emotion manipulating illusions
State: Shikai
Terms of Usage: Applies when the mist blades "cuts" through something
Description: The primary power of Zetsubō no Sākuru is it's power to trap someone within a illusion when it's mist blade passes through or "cuts" something or someone that can feel emotion, once done, it forms around drawing out a specific emotional response from the target, this emotion is entirely up to what the wielder calls out and the illusion is anything the wielder can come up with to trap his opponent in. it can also be used on multiple opponents at once.
Downside: The downsides are that the shikai has no physically blade and cannot wound anyone or anything while in it's shikai state, also a opponent can resist the illusion with a emotional response stronger then the one he tries to bring out like if Luke used a fear illusion on someone and they instead summoned courage from deep within themselves, they can escape the illusion this way, although the shikai is designed to break the mind and will of a target so in shikai, it heavily relies on the illusion power to defeat enemies. also, it doesn't work on someone devoid of emotion or someone who has no emotions to begin with, although it can work on someone who has suppress their emotions since they are still capable of feeling emotion, only they can resist the illusion better.

Name: Dreamwalker
State: Shikai, Bankai
Terms of Usage: Requires physical contact with someone already under the effects of the first ability.
Description: This ability allows Luke to enter the illusion world he creates in someone's mind by placing his hand on their forehead. Once inside, he's able to manipulate the world at will, creating vast landscapes like mazes, cities, parks, etc anything that Luke can think of, he can create with dreamwalker
Downside: Can only be used defensively while inside the illusion world so he can't create weapons but must integrate and alter his environment to defend and counter instead of attacking so it allows for interrogation. also if someone is not under Luke's illusion, this technique can't function without it since it needs to apply to someone already in a illusion.

Name: (Name of the ability)
State: (Regular, Shikai, Bankai, Visored Or All)
Terms of Usage:(Is the technique activated, or can you do it without any special terms or conditions)
Description: (Describe what your technique can and cant do)
Downside: (What is the downside to the technique)

Name: (Name of the ability)
State: (Regular, Shikai, Bankai, Visored Or All)
Terms of Usage:(Is the technique activated, or can you do it without any special terms or conditions)
Description: (Describe what your technique can and cant do)
Downside: (What is the downside to the technique)




Kido:

Hadō:

Kido Name: Usuinageha (Pale throwing blade)
Kido Number: #3
Kido Type: Hadō
Kido Incantation: "Mask of flesh and blood, birds that soar the heavens, rain upon thy foe and deliver him a finishing blow!"
Description: By charging up spirit energy in his arm with his hand flat but his palm flat out before making a arc with the arm, Luke can fire a small curved energy blade, able to cut through most things it comes into contact to. it can also be fired in rapid succession.
Downside: as it's only a #3 kido, the energy it's made of is rather weak and people strong then Luke can avoid it or even break it using a simple hand gesture or kick.

Kido Name: kōgeki Byakurai (Black strike, pale lightning)
Kido Number: #4
Kido Type: Kansen Hadō (infected way of destruction)
Kido Incantation:
Description: by pointing his index finger, Luke can fire a bolt of black lightning from his finger towards a target, enough to piece through durable targets.
Downside: although a stronger form of byakurai, it's still only a #4 kido so the amount of damage it does is relatively small and like the previous kido, it can be dodged.

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Kido Name: Kokumu shinkirō (Black mist mirage)
Kido Number: #31
Kido Type: Bakudō
Kido Incantation:
Description: Upon activating, this turns the caster into intangible black mist that disappears from people's sight, making the caster invisible to sight and it's designed to hide the caster's spiritual pressure and even smell so not even olfactory senses can track him while using this Bakudō. he also gains the ability to walk though walls due to his intangibility
Downside: while in this form, he cannot attack in anyway and while he may not be able to be seen or tracked via spiritual pressure, he can be heard so this can be used to track him while using this bakudo, although this is his voice so if he keeps quiet, this downside isn't as much as a problem.


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Re: Luke Yasenha (WIP)

Post by Lee_Takamoto on Thu Jan 01, 2015 11:15 pm

Just to throw a few things out there.
A. Visored's are currently closed so we aren't taking any at this current moment in time so you would have to leave the Vizard spots blank till they open up and then you can fill them out.
2. All abilities must be put in there proper areas, mostly at the bottom, even passive one's that are not focused on your Zanpakuto.

A good template to refer to would be one that I made in a similar situation as this one.

Just a few things I wanted to point out before things got TO detailed.


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Re: Luke Yasenha (WIP)

Post by Luke Yasenha on Fri Jan 02, 2015 4:00 am

Trust me, I am aware that you are not taking in Vizards currently but it would also be a waste to be rid of it, only to do the same only later so I prepose to seal it on my app so I cannot use it until such time that it is allowed again.

Well, just that your template is very confusing and lacking if you don't mind me saying, Lieutenant, Since there is a seperate section for abilities and powers to the one at the bottom, your template isn't particularity user friendly, I will edit in due time but I'm busy on Bleach story currently so I may take some time getting back to it so I'm in no hurry but thanks for letting me know, Lieutenant :)


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Re: Luke Yasenha (WIP)

Post by Suki on Sun Jan 04, 2015 4:25 am

Heya hun I am just wanting to say I have a number of problems with this character.

-You were a student and were "just able" to defeat a vasto Lorde (Quoting from your dark cell regeneration). They are a species of hollows that could not be faced by a captain alone (as per the bleach battle with the espada from 4 and up since they were all vasto lorde pre arrancarisation). I am finding it exceedingly difficult to believe a student was able to defeat one, which seemed to be stated by the post on dark cell regeneration.

-Second, since you are unable to be a vizard since that is closed for now, Dark cell regeneration is also null and Void since it rules out the use of hollows power, which apparently is one of the tjomgs that dark cell regen works on, since it uses a controlled version of said hollows power.

-Thirdly, I do not see a vice captain being a master of shunpo. You could be proefficient in it, yes, but being a master would be quite hard to think of. The best I can say is speak to the captain of squad 2 and ask him what he thinks your level of shunpo should be since you were apart of their division.

-Dreamwalker. though it is defensive as stated, since it is the mind of the person you are dealing with, then I would assume they can over power the ability since it is within their mind, given that there is a strength difference.

With regards to Kido, I would say kill it now. Please use the kido provided by dynasty, as oppose to making your own. I am sorry for the negative feedback, but for a vice captain it looks hopelessly (and quite ridiculously) Over Powered. It was agreed by myself and the captain of 3rd division aki.


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