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Alice of the Rose Complete

Post by alice of the Rose on Wed Aug 29, 2012 3:00 am

I AM Shinigami warrior of god

Basic Information:
Human Name:
Spoiler:
Christina Valentine
Shinigami Name: Alice
Gender: Female
Age: Appears 15. Actually age is 333.
Division: Division 13
Rank: Lt.
Residence: Great Britain
Appearance:

Clothes:
She commonly found in eccentric maid outfits. They are usually black and white in color, to match up with shinigami uniforms. With wide ended sleeves, puffy shoulders, a bonnet, multi layer skirts, and silk ribbons wherever they will fit. She wears stalkings and has one last very peculiar item of clothing. No matter what the outfit, she always wears an ankle bracelet on her left side. It is buckled tightly to her, and is very symbolic and important to her.

Stand Out Features:
There are three major features about this young girl. Her eyes, her hair, and her skin. Her eyes are as beautiful as they are terrifying. Large and deep crimson in color, they are impossible to miss against her black and white on the rest of her. Her hair, is more white than snow. Long and like silk it seems almost angelic. Her skin looks like porcelain that was painted by the moon light it's self.

Size:
As obvious as day, this girl is tiny. Standing at 4 foot 5 inches tall and weighing in at 72 pounds. she looks very child-like, and she uses this to her advantage from time to time. As she looks meek and defenseless, she will also act as such to bring out the parental nature in on coming foes.

Personal Abilities/ mastered techs~

Poison Blood: From adjusting to having the Neurotoxin injected into her blood so often, it no longer effects here, but that's not all. She has so much poison in her system she indeed can easily use her blood to infect others. When using her shikai, she simply slides the needles back, pricks her wrists and fills the needles with her neurotoxic blood. However, allowing her blood to land on your direct skin also results in being poisoned, discretion is advised.

Anemic Protection: While in use of her shikai the body uses a larger amount of blood, however she has built up a well oxygenated and large amount of red blood cells. With this, it helps from letting anemia take effect.

Hakuda: She has reached Mastery in Kakuda. Trained by the best of the best, her Hakuda is a fearsome power not to be underestimated, which sadly, it usually is. Her styles are called Fallen Leaf, Leaves in Wind, and Child of Discipline.

Hoho: Another thing she has Mastered. Again, trained by the best of the best. Her styles are called Leaves in the Wind, Energy Reverse, and direct fangs. Often miss judged do to her size, foes think they can use half energy and finish her off quickly. Her speed is incredible, and once landing an technique, her foes will find they picked the wrong person to battle.

Personality:
Alice believes strongly in proper edict. Growing up working for a noble house in Great Britain as a maid, she knows it quite well. Even to those whom act quite rude, she treats as an honored guest, until advised by her superior(s) to take action.
Alice is noted as a very quiet shy little girl. She stays back from new people until she is shown they can be trusted. She is never really hot or cold. Her soft girlish voice only tells a null set mood. The only way to get a spark out of her is usually by speaking directly at her. As this is how she was given orders, she responds well.
Her opinion of having companions is required. She is so used to direction, it is what makes her most comfortable. She is Leary of letting people near her that strike as constantly rude and ungrateful.
When someone does get into her circle of trust, she is a very open and knowledgeable help to a squad. Wise beyond her years she loves to study, learn, and apply. In that sense she is a team player.

Your Legacy:

Character Story:

Human Life:
Spoiler:

Another sunrise in your heart. I've never seen a dawn like this, before, Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. Sister of Charity, remains a mystery.

Love shines over aggression. I've never seen a dawn like this before. Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness.

I've never seen a dawn like this, before. Tears of the night turn to diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness, sister charity, you remain a mystery.

Christina's mother would sing this song to her every night until that faithful evening. Let's not get ahead of ourselves, to the beginning.

There were hard times in Merry Old London. A certain Miss Valentine as they called her was a simple back street prostitute. one too many patrons had let the young harlot with child. What is a poor woman without a husband to do? 5 women with the same profession lived in the small run down shack with the mother to be. It was too crowded for another. She needed a new job and quick.

After speaking to a select few of her more wealthy patrons, the woman found a new line of work. One of the Lords who came to see her often was indeed in need of a new house maid. He knew this one had more to offer than the average. Some after hours services. She would get her own room and the woman knew it was the best she could do.

The months began to pass and it was becoming ever more apparent that she was expecting. The expecting was becoming sooner than later, and this made the Lord ever less interested in keeping the pregnant maid. Never the less. Miss Valentine lasted until the baby was due, and in the bathroom with the help of the other two maids, a baby was born.

The child had the pale skin of a noble, and already had a wisp of hair on it's head. It looked as white as snow. A new baby girl cried out into the human world. As she wailed into the night, they all determined she deserved a beautiful name to match her glorious features. She was named Christina and given the last name of Valentine. Secretly telling of her mother, minus the true shame. So long the mother had aspirations of taking her child far from this madness.

With the hope to put the baby at ease, the mother sang: Another sunrise in your heart. I've never seen a dawn like this, before, Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. Sister of Charity, remains a mystery.

Love shines over aggression. I've never seen a dawn like this before. Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness.

I've never seen a dawn like this, before. Tears of the night turn to diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness, sister charity, you remain a mystery.


When the baby settled, her final strange feature was revealed. Slowly the child opened it's eyes. The were a deep demon like crimson color. The 4 women gasped. The other three women was sure it was a sign of the devil. Retrodution had come for Miss Valentine due to her life style. The harlot gave birth to the devil's child. The baby's mother saw nothing but perfection in the girl she held in her arms.

After the birth of the child life for the mother was easier again. The lord didn't mind the child, as it was on the way other end of the manor, so he rarely had to see it. He was out during the day when the child around the mother.

As the child began to grow she was only dressed in tattered old rags, but it was enough. She was always happy if her mother was there to sing to her at night.

Another sunrise in your heart. I've never seen a dawn like this, before, Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. Sister of Charity, remains a mystery.

Love shines over aggression. I've never seen a dawn like this before. Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness.

I've never seen a dawn like this, before. Tears of the night turn to diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness, sister charity, you remain a mystery.


Years began to pass and the child had just turned 5. By then the lord had become accustomed to the girl running about. He began to want a child of his own. Christina's mm was only 25 at this time. Still young enough t claim as a bride. However, he wouldn't want this girl running around if he did marry. The remaining proof of her history as a lady of the night.

He came to the young mother with the offer. Becoming a lady of the house was something beyond her wildest dreams. He told her the last terms of her right of passage. Giving up her child. He argued that the girl already knew the trade of being a maid well, as she had helped her mother since she could walk. He would offer her to his most honored of manors he was in contact with.

That evening Christina heard her mother's song for the last time.
Another sunrise in your heart. I've never seen a dawn like this, before, Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. Sister of Charity, remains a mystery.

Love shines over aggression. I've never seen a dawn like this before. Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness.

I've never seen a dawn like this, before. Tears of the night turn to diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness, sister charity, you remain a mystery.


Christina's mother kisses her on the forehead and held her close as they stood at the gates awaiting for the carriage to arrive and take the child away. The girl didn't understand what was going on. She was just excited to take a ride in the carriage! It was a rare treat for her. Slowly the distant sound of horses trotting along in the night began to grow louder. She looked up at her mother. Her eyes glowed with excitement. She was very confused to see her mother was not feeling the same, in fact looking quite sad.

The beautifully decorated carriage came to a stop, and her mother opened the doors and let a fake smile shine to try and re assure the child that it was alright. The girl happily climbed aboard. She look her seat and awaited for her mother to climb on. She didn't. Christina's eyes grew wide as her mother shut the door. Without a second glance the mother walked back up to the manor. The child watched out the window. Little did she know this was the last time she would see her mother.

The carriage pulled forward, and it was off to a new beginning. Alone in the darkness the young girl felt scared. She had never been apart from her mother. Traveling through the dark streets only accompanied by the clop clop clop of the horses feet hitting the road. In her sorrow she didn't cry. There was no reason to. Maybe she was only dreaming. She would wake up in her bed and return to her normal life.

The carriage came to a halt before a manor larger than she had ever seen before. you could fit two of her past place of residence in it with no trouble. She stared in awe. The tremendous building before her had a grace that was unparalleled. The driver opened her door and stood aside so she could descend down the stairs.

Despite her fears, she clumsily climbed down out of her safe haven that was her carriage quarters. A very tall and well dressed man stood in wait for her. He gasped as his eyes followed the child. My dear, you are even more exquisite then you were described to me. Excuse me, let me introduce myself. I am Lord Anamist. The man had a strong deep voice. He had a handsome smile, and clothes that seemed to be deserving of royalty.

Christina still had no idea about what was going on. This man was told about her? Where was she? Where was her mother? Well, are you not going to introduce yourself? Seems you lack total understanding of edict. You'll pick it up quickly around here. His speech was abrupt, but not rude.

Christina was filled to the brim with nervousness. Who ever this man was, she needed to prove her worth. Ch-Christina. Christina Valentine. With her dirty old rags she attempted a chertsey. After which, she was led up to the great house.

Into a corridor filled with exquisite maid outfits she went. Her old rags were intolerable and were a sheer sign of indignantly. She was redressed in elegance. The sophisticated maid outfit she was put in made her glow. Fully dressed, she re presented herself to the lord of the household.

He was satisfied with her cleaned up look. He explained that she would be a main hostess at all of his events, due to her amazing features. He told her from then on she would be known as Christina Dead. The little girl had no idea what this all meant, but she was honored to be in such beautiful clothing.

The top maid of the house taught the young girl the laws of being a hostess and proper edict. By the age of 7 she was a show stopper. Politely greeting guests the were in awe of her features, asked she to look into their eyes or touch her skin to see if it was make-up. It wasn't.

They began to forget she had a first name. She was simply called Miss Dead, or Dead Child. Christina never forgot her name, and often just felt like an incarcerated animal for display. A doll for show. She felt alone. On rainy evening she would look out her window on the 5th floor and would sing her mother's song.

Another sunrise in your heart. I've never seen a dawn like this, before, Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. Sister of Charity, remains a mystery.

Love shines over aggression. I've never seen a dawn like this before. Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness.

I've never seen a dawn like this, before. Tears of the night turn to diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness, sister charity, you remain a mystery.


As the maid's patience were tested further and further, a young master was growing quite fond of the girl. At this time, she had blossomed to the age of 14. All the guests had already seen the girl as above a house maid, as she only served at the parties and shown for all to see. It was not seen as odd when Master Conchord had gotten an interested in her. The quiet maid had no idea, but to the aristocrats it was obvious.

The kind man often pulled her aside from her duties for conversation and dances. To be honest, she was taken with him. He was forward and handsome. As the parties ended and he went on his way he had always left her breathless.She would stand at the banister and watch him take his leave.

On the night of Miss Dead's 15th birthday Master Choncord and herself had escaped the mass group of the party and went on a pleasant private stroll through the gardens. It was there that she sang for him.

Another sunrise in your heart. I've never seen a dawn like this, before, Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. Sister of Charity, remains a mystery.

Love shines over aggression. I've never seen a dawn like this before. Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness.

I've never seen a dawn like this, before. Tears of the night turn to diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness, sister charity, you remain a mystery.


As they thought they were alone they enjoyed their time together. They were not alone. Gazing out the window the lord heard her sing. Over the years he had fallen in love with her as well. He knew tonight the young master would ask for her hand. He couldn't give her up. The lord wanted to horde the girl for himself. He wanted to covet the song she would sing at night. He didn't know what he could possibly do. All the rich an powerful expected the master and the maid to marry. How could he rid himself of this young man?

The lord stood in his study as Miss Dead escorted and said good bye to all the guests. For a maid to get all these exquisite gifts and attention had been un heard of, but all was an exception for the beautiful doll girl. The Master stood beside her in is charming seep silence. Whispers spread through the dying crowd about the next party being an engagement party, this was to be the night he would ask for her hand.

The young master took Miss Dead by the arm and began to escort her up to the lord's private study. If you are going to marry me. Will you call me by my first name. No one seems to remember it but me. Its- The were cut off by the abrupt stumbling forward lord. He was obviously drunk. Up worried in his study all night he had been drinking hard liquor.

You can't have her! He sloshed. She's mine! I'll keep her as a prized doll forever! A loud bam sound filled the air.

Christina felt a hot and painful shock in her chest. She remembered closing her eyes and falling forward. That was the last few moments she spent alive.

Soul Life:
Spoiler:

As Christina awoke, she felt strange. How was she moving? She had died. Her face flushed red. She was in rags! Her beautifully made maid outfit was gone. She heard the gentle rustle of chains. Her eyes lowered, and to her horror, the chain was in her neck! It gave her such a fright she flailed her arms and fell back onto her butt.

It was just about sunrise and she found herself in the gardens. A strange noise she could hear in the distance. It was incredibly frightening. It was a sound she had never heard before. Some sort of animal? She was frightened and alone. She sang to herself to calm herself.
Another sunrise in your heart. I've never seen a dawn like this, before, Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. Sister of Charity, remains a mystery.

Love shines over aggression. I've never seen a dawn like this before. Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness.

I've never seen a dawn like this, before. Tears of the night turn to diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness, sister charity, you remain a mystery.


She let out a sigh of relief, but it was caught short. The awful cry of some creature was heard again, but this time it sounded much closer. Turning tail, she ran inside the manor. Her heart pounded faster and faster. The manor was dark and silent. It was empty. No party, no maids, and no lord. She was sure this was due to her own death. She slid down against the door and sat in silence.

Again, the roar of some sort of demon filled the air, closer than ever. Was it the Devil coming to claim her soul? Her whole body trembled. She covered her ears and began to cry. Help! Help me! Somebody help! She screeched. She curled into a ball against the door. What was she to do? She had not done wrong. Why was she bound for hell?

There was a slashing sound, and a slam. Then there was silence. She froze in place and listened. She heard the sigh of a man, and foot steps growing closer. She scooted back away from to door. She was scared and confused. The door opened.

In stepped a man dressed in clothes like she had never seen before. A strange black outfit and sandles with socks. She choked on her words of question before they could spill out of her mouth. She just stared. You'll be find. I took care of him. The tall strange man said with a smile. Christina simply stared up at him. Don't worry about it. Off you go. He pulled out a sword, which alarmed the girl. She twitched and closed her eyes. She felt something touch her forehead and the man said some odd words.

She opened her eyes to see she was sinking into an odd glowing hole. Off to heaven, soul. The man said and turned to walk away.

Rukongai:
Spoiler:

Heaven was not at all what the young girl had expected. Dusty crap towns that were over crowded. Most of the area was in fact dangerous. She had learned for those who wanted to, it was hard to find dead loved ones. This really didn't phase her, considering as far as she was aware, n one she had grown close to had died. Never the less, in her rags, there she was, all alone.

Luckily Christina had ended up in a better area than most. A bit cleaner with less crime than average. Her hostess skills and edict had earned her a job as a waitress at a small tea shop. It was odd, but she was told that most people here were not hungry.

This struck her as odd because honestly, she loved food. She was hungry and her stomach would growl if she tried to deny the feeling.It was absurd. Those with hunger were told to become shinigami. Despite her hunger, she doubted she had what it took to become a shinigami, and simply blew off the symptom. Her job supplied her with sufficient funds to support her hunger and a small boarding room to live in.

Here, she changed her name to Alice. She was very weary of revealing hr true name again. The last time she had planed to let someone know, it lead to her death. She wanted to save it to tell to someone truly worthy of her. She didn't feel to bother making up a last name. Alice would do. She was simply Alice.

Snug in her new life style, she came into work like any other day. She sang aloud for the patrons to hear, as they loved her vice: Another sunrise in your heart. I've never seen a dawn like this, before, Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. Sister of Charity, remains a mystery.

Love shines over aggression. I've never seen a dawn like this before. Tears of the night turn into diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness.

I've never seen a dawn like this, before. Tears of the night turn to diamonds in your eyes. In the face of the world's ugliness, sister charity, you remain a mystery.
It was a Friday morning, and as always a few guests littered about waiting for her kind face to greet and serve them. She went behind the counter and began setting up her tea cups when an obviously drunken man stumbled through the door. He must've been still lit from the night before.

The whole shop froze and simply stared at him. Alice was put on high alert. She didn't exactly have happy memories with drunken men. Slowly the man stumbled forward to the counter and simply grabbed onto Alice's forearm. This is where things get interesting.

Alice zoned out of all that was around her but herself and this man. She grabbed onto his wrist with her opposite hand and gripped with with an enormous strength. The startled man released her and looked up at her in fear. The small girl whipped his arm around in a sudden twist, the man's arm snapped. His tibia broke under the immense force.

Slow clapping awakened Alice from her hypnosis. She let go of the man and gasped at herself. Covering her mouth with her left hand she looked in horror at the damage she had done. The clapping man stood. It was a shinigami. Alice became ever more embarrassed. The shinigami didn't seem upset with her, in fact he looked quite pleased. Quite the arm you've got there, young lady. How about using it for the shinigami?

Alice was stunned. The man had offered to escort her to the academy. She was going to train and learn in the arts of the shinigami. Her! The small little maid. She was so stunned she forgot to say yes, as she took hold of his arm. The man only laughed, and she lightly blushed.Alice was ready to move forward, and serve a higher purpose. Her life was to serve, and she would serve to work under powerful leader. More powerful than the lords of the human world she had left behind.

The Academy:
Spoiler:

Academy life was a fun and easy time for Miss Valentine. Standing out was in every angle of her existence so far. All the odd stares at her she had learned to accept and just continued with her work. She always preformed to the best of her abilities. The level of her abilities stunned all those around her. She didn't gain a pride for how well she preformed. She always remained refined and kind. As silent as a mouse she never put herself above anyone. She did what she was told and that was that.

Graduation drew closer, and was no worry for her. She did well in Kido, but it was not really a big concern. It was common for a small female such as herself to excell in Kido, but her heart was in Hakuda and hoho.

That girl put her whole heart and soul into hakuda and hoho. If she had any time at all, it was put into the training of these arts. She grew faster and faster, stronger and stronger, she was happy. The small girl was the top of her class in both of these arts. This did not sit well with the larger and older students. One particular young man was into his 4th years, and lost his spot on top to her in hakuda. He wanted revenge. His mistake, ultimately.

Quietly entering the massive Hoho dojo, the older boy attempted to trip her on her way in the door. Used to such foolish antics she didn't even acknowledge the pathetic attempt and continued on. That is, until he began to take his rude behavior to a new level. Hey, you. Freak with the red eyes. He called. To this Alice stopped in her tracks.

She turned to face the 4th year. Yeah, you. You're only better than us because you are some sort of freak of nature. He smiled a cruel grin. Despite his attempt, Alice didn't respond and simply waited for their Sensei to enter the class. The boy glowered as his ruse had failed.

Today was a final task to graduate the class. It as an extreme game of tag. However, in this game everyone is "it". In a massive jungle-like room you must be the last one left to be tagged. Hoho was more than the skill to hit others, but it was also the skill to avoid contact. For this reason, this game of tag was perfect.

The game began with all 10 students around the jungle. One a bell was rang the game would begin. Everyone would zoom into the forest and try to eliminate the competition or survive. The professors would watch and grade each student. From their collective notes they would determine if you would graduate or continue learning in the academy.

Before the games began, Alice hummed her song to herself. This required a calm mind, not brute strength. The bell rang and the game began. Into the forest Alice went. She knew her limbs were shorter than all of her competitors, but she was more agile and faster. She ran along a trunk, until she was spotted by another girl in her class. This other girl was very forward with her attacks. Alice just had to wait until the girl launched forward and Alice simply dropped down. What this girl didn't know was that a 3rd year boy was waiting at the top of the tree. The two that aimed for Alice ended up hitting each other. Due to the negligence of noticing another presence, they both failed and existed the forest. How many other students had been eliminated? Who had spotted her? There was no time to stop, she would have to think on the go.

Zooming around the bases of trunks, she hoped to gain some attention. It would be instinctual to stick to the tree canopy above for cover, but that is not how you win. 3 students had picked up on her movement, which was by far not at full mast. She moved faster and let the 3 battle within themselves. With less competition and more space it would make sense to only go for the winner of the 3. In only seconds the fighting between the few was done. That same 4th year boy from earlier in the class was the winner. His eyes were filled with the lust of anger. That anger clouded him. This made Alice smile.

She shunpoed up back into the canopy for this final show down. Her foe followed her trail. Landing on a strong branch and the foe appeared only a few meters away. She stood still and focused. The boy had no patience and moved in to finish this show down. All our sweet girl had to do was rotate 360 degrees around the trunk at the right time. she simply reached behind her and touched his back with her pointer finger. With that touch the game was over.

Alice had graduated with a combatinent title in kido, mastery in hoho, Hakuda, and shunpo. She can release and control her Shikai. Now, it was time to go out into the world and show them her stuff. A 3rd year graduating was an honor, and now she was given the job for Lt. seat in the 13th Division. There is where our story ends. Or more, where it comes to so far.




Your Zanpakuto:

Zanpakuto Name:
Kuuki Kitsune
Sealed Appearance:
The hilt that can be seen from the space in her kimono, but the rest is hidden inside. From this, no one can see how long the blade really is. They would be surprised that it is only 14 inches long total, so including that 4 inch hilt. It has a very long width at the end, and has a dragon decorated into the blade. On the top of the hilt is a red small string. The hilt that can be seen from the space in her mid section corset, but the rest is hidden inside her large skirt. From this, no one can see how long the blade really is. They would be surprised that it is only 14 inches long total, so including that 4 inch hilt. It has a very long width at the end, and has a dragon decorated into the blade. On the top of the hilt is a red small string. It is made of silk, the sudden color is as striking as her eyes.
Zanpakuto Spirit Description:
A great Silver dragon, Kuuki Is a very slender and snake like dragon with bird like feet. With two weaving whiskers on his face and bright yellow eyes. His flight is majestic yet sharp, like Alice's. He has a set of sharp spine needles along the upper part of his slender back, that are said to be quite poisonous.

Neurotoxin information~
Spoiler:
Neurotoxin 1: Tetraethylammonium (TEA for short). ~ Right holster releases this~
This is a neurotoxin that exists in real life. identified through its damaging effects to the nervous system and shown to have the capacity of inhibiting the function of motor nerves and thus the contraction of the musculature in a manner similar to that of curare. Additionally, through chronic TEA administration, muscular atrophy would be induced.
These effects will only happen in the area where the neurotoxin is delivered. Examples: A hit to your finger would lead to your whole hand, to your upper arm, upper arm cannot be used. However, hits to the upper arm or leg can lead to delayed reaction to the lower areas of said limb due to extremely impaired nervous system communication.

Second neurotoxin: Aluminum ~ Left holster releases this~
Another real neurotoxin. The Neurotoxic behavior of aluminum is known to occur upon entry into the circulatory system, where it can migrate to the brain and inhibit some of the crucial functions of the blood brain barrier (BBB). A loss of function in the BBB can produce significant damage to the neurons in the CNS, as the barrier protecting the brain from other toxins found in the blood will no longer be capable of such action. Though the metal is known to be neurotoxic, effects are usually restricted to patients incapable of removing excess ions from the blood, such as those experiencing retinal failure. Patients experiencing aluminum toxicity can exhibit symptoms such as impaired learning and reduced motor coordination.
For full effects of this neurotoxin there has to be a build up of it to allow for the full effects. 3 hits is when the opponent if feeling the full effects. Once the foe is under full effect they will have the symptoms for 3 posts. While slowly gaining the symptoms from the first 2 hits, Sorincha has 6 posts from each to level up to the next hit with symptoms still in effect.


~Duration of Neurotoxin effects is 3 posts~
~ Foe has 2 posts before Neurotoxin symptoms kick in~

Shikai
Shikai Release Phrase: Holding the Zanpakuto between her two forearms, it glows a bright yellow color, and transforms, wrapping around her two lower arm portions. The exact command is: "Let me see your slender and swift skills, Kuuki Kitsune."
Released Appearance: Attached at both forearms are braces of zanpakuto grade strength. The holsters carry up to 6 needles at a time. However, this doesn't mean that is a total number of needles she can create before needing to reload. She can potentially make up to hundreds of needles. If a needle is fired and doesn't land where it was intended, the particles shatter and return as a fresh needle in the holster. The brace also covers the opposite side of the arm for protection, and are of Zanpakuto material, so can block attacks.
The needles are made of Zanpakuto material, as well. The needles are 7 inches in length. they only have 1 cm width, descending to .03 Cm at the tiny tips, to easily pierce the harshest of skins. The holster and needles are black in color.
Other Changes: None

Shikai Techniques:

Passive~

Technique Name: Needles Taking Flight
Description:Her zanpakuto automatically creates focused air currents around the needles that propel them at speeds as fast as her Ho Ho. The wind manipulation allows the needles to travel at extreme speeds, making it possible to pierce the skin of super powered enemies. To help visualize, think of it as a shunko, in how it wraps about her body.


Active~ (Nerotoxin effects listed above)

Technique Name: Fan of Needles
Description: needles between your fingers and use wind to make a temporary fan infusing the Neurotoxin into the blasts of wind, although this would be less potent than the needles version of the Neurotoxin by 50%. (Note: This doesn't effect the amount of times to activate the symptoms or detoxing time.) This move cannot be used by both hands at different intervals. It can be done at once with the two different hands to double the range.
Range: 150 Meters Dual: 230 Meters
Duration: 1 post
Cool down: 1 post

= tiers- The extreme gust can blow the foe back a couple yards and a few cuts due to the cutting strength of the winds.
v tiers- The gust will throw the foe back quite a ways with some sufficient wounds due to the power in the winds.
^ tiers- Foe may take a step back to regain footing. Doubtful to get injured from said winds.

Technique Name: Cyclone of needles
Description: Using the element of wind as well as her quick fire of needles she fires then in a cyclone-like shape from the holster towards the enemy. This move can be shot from all directions.
Range: 100 meters
Duration: 1 post
Cool down: 2 posts

= tiers- Will probably b struck 3-5 times with the unleashed needles. Needles with stick in deep to the skin, so the foe would be feeling that.
V tiers- Struck 7+ times by the needles. The foe would be quite shocked by the pain inflicted by the finely pointed needles.
^ tiers- Maybe 1 or 2 needles would be able to stick the foe if timed well. Doubtful that they would be feeling much pain, just the shock value of seeing these needles bedded in your skin.

Technique Name: Needle Claws
Description: Extending the needles to the ends of the holsters, the reach out under her palms for hand to hand combat. Contact causes direct poisoning. Not to mention the direct contact with the sharp needles cannot feel very good. This can be down with both holsters at once or at separate times.
Range: Hand to hand combat
Duration: 4 posts
Cool down: 2 posts

= tiers- Sufficient cuts left by the sharp needles. Each individual cut left is an opportunity to infect the foe with the neurotoxin.
v tiers- Deep cuts left by the sharp needles. Each individual cut left is an opportunity to infect the foe with the neurotoxin.
^ tirs- Light cuts left by the sharp needles. Each individual cut is a chance to infect, but due to how light the wound is, symptoms take twice as long to take effect.

Technique Name: Neurotoxic Missiles
Description: Shooting 3 needles at once from a holster, using her focus she guides it with her wind elemental control. Loss of concentration means loss of the ability to guide the currently launched set of needles. The speed matches that of sound. Contact will cause poisoning. This can be done with both holsters or with one first and the second on the next 2 posts while the other holster is still on it's cool down.
Range: 60 Meters
Duration 3 posts
Cool down: 2 posts

= tiers- Hit Will cause the needles to be deeply in-bedded into the skin. The force of the hit will knock the foe off balance. Causes infection of the neurotoxin.
v tiers- Hit will in-bed into the bone of the foe, and would be very painful to remove. The force of the hit will send the foe back a few yards. Causes infection.
^ tiers- Hit will cause the needles to in-bed themselves into the skin. Not too deep, but thy are in there. Will cause infection.


~ This will be added later on! I want her to have more history before reaching full potential.~
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