Lost Love

When I was once a little girl,
Life was pure white like a pearl.
Love was simple, love was pure,
As well as being simply immature.

I saw my parent’s happy daily lives,
Thought marriage meant happy wives.
So I turned and told my papa too,
When I grow up I’ll marry you!

He laughed as he carried me high,
Silly girl, was his only reply.
Much has since come to pass,
Many years has since passed.

Relationships had since come & gone,
From Love’s games I had withdrawn.
Living life independent, on my own,
Doing everything I want, yet all alone.

That was until you crossed my path,
And I fell in love with your laugh.
You were always so caring & sincere,
And to my life you brought much cheer.

Until the day you knelt before me,
Asking: “Would you marry me?”
Tears of anguish & tears of joy,
For he, my love, I must destroy.

I rejected him as I turned & left,
I knew I left him feeling bereft.
But my heart, it cried tears of blood,
And anguish poured out in a flood.

But still I continued walking on,
I knew I had to sever that bond.
For I knew what was to come,
To love I mustn’t succumb.

Three months has since passed,
I smiled as I breathed my last.
He would read my letter tomorrow,
And it would be a big blow.

I’m sorry that I lied,
I’m sorry that I died,
But one thing I must tell you,
Truly, truly, I loved you.

C & C appreciated!

Excellent poem. It's tear jerking.

As far as I can see, there aren't any flaws here.

Beautiful.

By the way, that girl is very silly. D:

Silly silly silly.

Ahhh..

Erm.

Yes. The girl is silly!

I wonder who she is =X

Could it be you? D:

*gasps*

Maybe I, the great Kambly, am right! Or maybe I am not. XD

Is this poem based on any type of personal experience, or just something you heard about?

Nah.. It was just a competition with some online friends. And it must have the line "would you marry me" in it.

I won hands down XD

wow absolutely Wonderful.
Such a great Read

Very sad as well
Your a great writer

Thanks ^^

Hehe^^

No problem.
However I believe that you have just spammed Miss Admin
XD lol

Erm. Must I say thank you in more than 15 words? It's kind of lame.

I can't figure out how to write such a long thank you letter you know?

And since i'm the admin, no infractions for me XD

jtingx wrote:Lost Love

When I was once a little girl,
Life was pure white like a pearl.
Love was simple, love was pure,
As well as being simply immature.

I saw my parent’s happy daily lives,
Thought marriage meant happy wives.
So I turned and told my papa too,
When I grow up I’ll marry you!

He laughed as he carried me high,
Silly girl, was his only reply.
Much has since come to pass,
Many years has since passed.

Relationships had since come & gone,
From Love’s games I had withdrawn.
Living life independent, on my own,
Doing everything I want, yet all alone.

That was until you crossed my path,
And I fell in love with your laugh.
You were always so caring & sincere,
And to my life you brought much cheer.

Until the day you knelt before me,
Asking: “Would you marry me?”
Tears of anguish & tears of joy,
For he, my love, I must destroy.

I rejected him as I turned & left,
I knew I left him feeling bereft.
But my heart, it cried tears of blood,
And anguish poured out in a flood.

But still I continued walking on,
I knew I had to sever that bond.
For I knew what was to come,
To love I mustn’t succumb.

Three months has since passed,
I smiled as I breathed my last.
He would read my letter tomorrow,
And it would be a big blow.

I’m sorry that I lied,
I’m sorry that I died,
But one thing I must tell you,
Truly, truly, I loved you.

C & C appreciated!

that poem wat soooo beutiful i loved it sooo much it almost made me cry too



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